1. How do you feel about the paper so far? Please explain and offer evidence from the work.
So far I feel the paper is ok. I know it can definitely use more work. He sources need to be used better. I need to put more of myself in it. I need to use more examples and explain myself more.
2. What remains to be done? Please be precise.
I need to organize things better and explain the causes and effects more. I need to put myself in the paper, and make my voice heard.
3. What questions do you have for readers about the piece?
How do I make this easier for the reader to understand without losing what I am trying to say?
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